[Rprotobuf-commits] r791 - papers/jss

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Author: murray
Date: 2014-01-15 06:12:26 +0100 (Wed, 15 Jan 2014)
New Revision: 791

Modified:
   papers/jss/article.Rnw
Log:
Add back the article 'the' in the second sentence of the introduction,
and revert back to my use of 'different' rather than various.

I believe this flows better but don't have a strong preference if
someone can explain why they like the change.

Adding the article 'the' makes it more concrete/definitive.  Certainly
others could come up with a different break down of the phases of data
analysis, but that doesn't make our breakdown wrong, and thus I see no
reason to avoid the article 'the' here, if that was indeed the reason
for the change.



Modified: papers/jss/article.Rnw
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--- papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-15 05:03:21 UTC (rev 790)
+++ papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-15 05:12:26 UTC (rev 791)
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
 %Data analysis patterns such as Split-Apply-Combine
 %\citep{wickham2011split} explicitly break up large problems into manageable pieces.  
 These pipelines are frequently built using different programming 
-languages for various phases of data analysis -- collection, 
+languages for the different phases of data analysis -- collection,
 cleaning, modeling, analysis, post-processing, and
 presentation in order to take advantage of the unique combination of
 performance, speed of development, and library support offered by