[Rprotobuf-commits] r790 - papers/jss

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Author: murray
Date: 2014-01-15 06:03:21 +0100 (Wed, 15 Jan 2014)
New Revision: 790

Modified:
   papers/jss/article.Rnw
Log:
Move the first sentence of the introduction a little back towards the
direction of my original version.  Specifically, "manage and control
complexity" is redundant, so move back to my "better manage software
complexity".  Also add back the "increasingly", as I mentioned in
email wanting to make this point specifically -- the utility of this
multi-platform pattern becomes more evident with scale and larger code
bases, which happens increasingly often now as computer systems get
larger.



Modified: papers/jss/article.Rnw
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--- papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-15 04:30:13 UTC (rev 789)
+++ papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-15 05:03:21 UTC (rev 790)
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
 
 \section{Introduction} % TODO(DE) More sober: Friends don't let friends use CSV}
 
-Modern data collection and analysis pipelines involve collections
-of decoupled components in order to manage and control complexity 
+Modern data collection and analysis pipelines increasingly involve collections
+of decoupled components in order to better manage software complexity 
 through reusability, modularity, and fault isolation \citep{Wegiel:2010:CTT:1932682.1869479}.
 % This is really a different pattern not connected well here.
 %Data analysis patterns such as Split-Apply-Combine