[Rprotobuf-commits] r792 - papers/jss

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Author: murray
Date: 2014-01-15 06:18:25 +0100 (Wed, 15 Jan 2014)
New Revision: 792

Modified:
   papers/jss/article.Rnw
Log:
Each is more correct than every as it is used in this sentence, so
revert back to my previous usage of 'each' here, but keep some of the
other nice improvements that were made to this sentence.



Modified: papers/jss/article.Rnw
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--- papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-15 05:12:26 UTC (rev 791)
+++ papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-15 05:18:25 UTC (rev 792)
@@ -126,9 +126,9 @@
 cleaning, modeling, analysis, post-processing, and
 presentation in order to take advantage of the unique combination of
 performance, speed of development, and library support offered by
-each environment or language. Every stage of such a data
+different environments and languages.  Each stage of such a data
 analysis pipeline may produce intermediate results that need to be
-stored or sent over the network for further processing. 
+stored in a file or sent over the network for further processing. 
 % JO Perhaps also mention that serialization is needed for distributed
 % systems to make systems scale up?