[Rprotobuf-commits] r821 - papers/jss

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Author: murray
Date: 2014-01-22 23:23:57 +0100 (Wed, 22 Jan 2014)
New Revision: 821

Modified:
   papers/jss/article.Rnw
Log:
Add a missing article in the mapreduce/histogram application section
and try using \begin{Code} instead of \begin{verbatim} in that section
(seems to be typeset the same, I may try more changes to improve the
typsetting of this example).

Steve Scott noticed that one sentence in the conclusion had the word
'other' in it 3 times -- remove one superfluous word as he suggested.

Split another run-on sentence in the conclusion into two sentences as
suggested by Steve as well.



Modified: papers/jss/article.Rnw
===================================================================
--- papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-22 21:24:28 UTC (rev 820)
+++ papers/jss/article.Rnw	2014-01-22 22:23:57 UTC (rev 821)
@@ -1527,11 +1527,11 @@
 \begin{verbatim}
   protoc histogram.proto --python_out=.
 \end{verbatim}
-This generates Python module called \texttt{histogram\_pb2.py}, containing both the 
+This generates a Python module called \texttt{histogram\_pb2.py}, containing both the 
 descriptor information as well as methods to read and manipulate the histogram 
 message data.
 
-\begin{verbatim}
+\begin{Code}
 # Import modules
 from histogram_pb2 import HistogramState;
 
@@ -1547,7 +1547,7 @@
 outfile = open("/tmp/hist.pb", "wb")
 outfile.write(hist.SerializeToString())
 outfile.close()
-\end{verbatim}
+\end{Code}
 
 We can then read in the histogram into R and plot it with :
 
@@ -1814,11 +1814,11 @@
 for the past three years by statisticians, analysts and software engineers.
 At the time of this writing there are more than 300 active
 users of \pkg{RProtoBuf} using it to read data from and otherwise interact
-with other distributed systems written in C++, Java, Python, and 
+with distributed systems written in C++, Java, Python, and 
 other languages.
 
-As the \pkg{RProtoBuf} package provides users with the ability to generate,
-parse and manipulate Protocol Buffer messages in R, it is our hope that this
+The \pkg{RProtoBuf} package provides users with the ability to generate,
+parse and manipulate Protocol Buffer messages in R.  It is our hope that this
 package will make Protocol Buffers more accessible to the R community, and
 thereby makes a small contribution towards better integration between R and
 other software systems and applications.