[Rprotobuf-commits] r792 - papers/jss
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Wed Jan 15 06:18:26 CET 2014
Author: murray
Date: 2014-01-15 06:18:25 +0100 (Wed, 15 Jan 2014)
New Revision: 792
Modified:
papers/jss/article.Rnw
Log:
Each is more correct than every as it is used in this sentence, so
revert back to my previous usage of 'each' here, but keep some of the
other nice improvements that were made to this sentence.
Modified: papers/jss/article.Rnw
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--- papers/jss/article.Rnw 2014-01-15 05:12:26 UTC (rev 791)
+++ papers/jss/article.Rnw 2014-01-15 05:18:25 UTC (rev 792)
@@ -126,9 +126,9 @@
cleaning, modeling, analysis, post-processing, and
presentation in order to take advantage of the unique combination of
performance, speed of development, and library support offered by
-each environment or language. Every stage of such a data
+different environments and languages. Each stage of such a data
analysis pipeline may produce intermediate results that need to be
-stored or sent over the network for further processing.
+stored in a file or sent over the network for further processing.
% JO Perhaps also mention that serialization is needed for distributed
% systems to make systems scale up?
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